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I’m only sure of two things:
I still carry pieces of your cross on my back and
lilies were your favorite flower

Those last three months-

A silent drive home from the mall
purse full of stolen makeup

Dinners with my family where no one
bothered to make the conversion

Endless hours spent looking at paint samples
and I was smart to not buy the brushes

The line at the liquor store blended
with the lines on the road

At the same time with you
without you

Then it was summer and you talked me into a country drive. We stopped on the side of the road to watch a cow giving birth in the center of a pasture. But, the calf never rose to its wobbly legs or felt the heat of the Indian summer….it never tasted dandelions.

The mother stood by the calf’s body
long past nightfall
and I stood by yours
long after that

Was this what we meant when we said forever?
It's been months since I've submitted. So there it is...
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thelanyi Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful.
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camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Emotional. Stunning.
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tenrec4tea Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
Lovely to see something from you in my inbox!

I'm confused about the fourth stanza:
Dinners with my family where no one
bothered to make the conversion
I don't get conversion. The marriage of the narrator and their significant other? Religion?

But, the calf never rose to its wobbly legs or felt the heat of the Indian summer….it never tasted dandelions. This is my favorite line.

Either way, lovely work.
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darkallegiance666 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
This is so sad - well written.
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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AustinTheMisanthrope Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
bravo. I tip my hat to you, for that was fantastic.
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runfromthelight Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Gorgeous. Really moved me, great work.
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AlterEgo1629 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The line at the liquor store blended
with the lines on the road
I love this.
Fantastic work.
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WordWeight Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Student Writer
So glad to read this!!! You're still an amazing poet as ever :D
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pseudonym-blue Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
This is really good :)
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